The Sound

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Sage Rose (the Zone BBS remains forever my home page) on Monday, 18-Jun-2007 13:21:38

The sound of the sea
The scent of the air
Take me to a place
Where the breeze runs through my hair
The feel of the sand
The warmth of the day
Let me fly, let me fly away
From the place where I felt hollow
To the place where I feel whole
It’s the sound of the sea
And the light in my soul
From the place of my childhood
To the place I call home
I will never return
To the hell I have known
It’s the way of the water
And the cool gentle mist
It’s the sound of the sea
And the love I have missed.

Post 2 by ~*Dark_Light*~ (I just keep on posting!) on Wednesday, 20-Jun-2007 19:15:36

Beautiful.
It is as though a melody sweet can be heard
as these words here are taken in.

~*Thunderous MidNgiht*~

Post 3 by blbobby (Ooo you're gona like this!) on Thursday, 21-Jun-2007 5:57:59

Very good.

Thanks for posting it.

Bob

Post 4 by SensuallyNaturallyLiving4Today (LivingLifeAndLovingItToo) on Sunday, 01-Jul-2007 18:53:26

I like the illiteration of hollow and hole. It's a little rhymey for my tastes in poetry, I prefer the free-form sort, but they would make truly beautiful song lyrics. Actually I can see the sweeping movement of the ocean reflected in music for a song with these as the lyrics. Perhaps you might write a song for them or have a musician friend do that. Very nice.

Post 5 by Reyami (I've broken five thousand! any more awards going?) on Tuesday, 10-Jul-2007 10:53:51

agree with Heather